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Liv Gift

EmilyBlueStar

Published: May 18, 2012

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Description

This a gift for

becuase i love her oc and the oyutfit she drew heri n TTwTT

I prase poepel who dont have mary sues oc or different oc's....

i think liv is an Ocelet i odnt see much Ocelet sonic oc's....
yes i know the feet such but im trying out poses so gimmy time >8I

well i hopeu liek it.. i cant coloru it beucasei suck balls at colouring :<

Image size

2592x1936px 2.43 MB

Make

Apple

Model

iPhone 4

Shutter Speed

1/15 second

Aperture

F/2.8

Focal Length

4 mm

ISO Speed

320

Date Taken

May 18, 2012, 1:23:53 PM

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pawsinc

May 18, 2012

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_{I am willing to write a critique :3

Okay lets start with the anatomy. Well the pose is well put off but the legs look a bit messed up. It's impossible to turn your foot in that direction really. Both feet should be face towards the ground. The right hand looks pretty bad. The thumb is placed on the wrong side of the hand. It should be on the other side. The breast looks a bit wonky also. It's like her top is squeezing her breast and suffocating her. Breasts should always stick out unless the character is lying down.

Her other ear should be able to appear on the other side of her head at least. Liv has really long ears so it should be possible to see the other ear on the other side of her head at least. Also the sketch is a little bit hard to see. You should try to erase some of the stray marks on the sketch so it would be easier to see <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>.

Well I can say I love this picture regardless <3 I really love the pose you put her in and he expression :3. Thank you for the gift! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/>}